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You cannot use the physical nature of the words.2
List A: Pile. Pie. Pillar. Pin. List B: Sponge. Spit. Spirit. Tattoo.3
“Pairing”
On some basis pair a word from list A with a word from list B. Define the basis.1
You have 5 minutes to write down your thoughts.4
Creative Thinking
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Flickr user Tom Mrazek
The truth is this: writing well is
part habit, part knowledge of
some fundamental rules, and
part giving a damn.
Ann Handley, MarketingProfs
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A brand’s voice is its personality
communicated in language.
voice = tone of voice = tone = personality = sound
Sound
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The [uncovering] of who is
talking precedes the words
themselves and determines
them.
Ryan Caroll
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Brand book
Employees
Loyal customers
Past advertisements
Uncovering Sound
Existing brand assets
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Expressing Sound
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Profiles
If your brand were a person, who would it be?
How would they talk?
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Expressing Sound
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Adjectives
A curated and meaningful* collection of 3-5
words that sum up a brand’s personality
*extension of the brand values
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Expressing Sound
Manifestos
A pithy paragraph, or list of principles, that
declare a brand’s motivations – a rally cry
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Often, brands will express their sound in
a number of ways to paint a clear picture.
Expressing Sound
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Style is the technique of writing.
Flickr user Butch Dalisay
Style
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“Trying to add style is like wearing a toupé...”
Flickr user Keli Schimelpfenig
Style
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George Orwell’s 6 Rules for Writing
(i) Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are
used to seeing in print.
(ii) Never use a long word where a short one will do.
(iii) If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
(iv) Never use the passive where you can use the active.
(v) Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you
can think of an everyday English equivalent.
(vi) Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
Style
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Try cutting a lot of your word-
count, especially those words
that add little extra meaning.
Don’t over-use the passive voice.
And whether passive or active,
be clear who did what to whom.
= Edit ruthlessly = Write straightforward with
strong verbs
Style
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To edit effectively, let it cool.
Style
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What’s the biggest difference
between writing and copywriting?
Copywriting Sells
Flickr user Aranami
Style
42. Flow
• Beginning – strong start,
continuation from the
headline
• Middle – selling facts
revolving around thesis
• End – call to action,
concluding fact or a line that
relates back to the headline
Structure
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Structure
Coherence
The relationship of the parts to
the parts
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Structure
Unity
The relationship of the parts to
the whole
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A story is an account of events that
happen over time to someone(s) to
interest, amuse or instruct.
Flickr user Marc Wathieu
Story
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Flickr user Honou
What are the 7 key elements of a story?
The “core argument” of the story.1
The “who” of your story.2
The central image or thing in which is condensed much of a story's meaning.2
First, second, third, limited, omniscient4
The ”where” of your story.5
The “personality” of the story.6
The “engine” of your story.7
Story